Wednesday, 17 March 2010

Questions 3 What have you learned from your audience feedback?

I took the idea of wordle and changed the concept and created this to show the class feedback for my digipac draft copy. The largest font is the positive feedback and smaller fonts are negative.



This is what people had said about my draft digipac, I reflected their feedback and disagreed and agreed with some points but I decided not to change the digipac to the feedback, but continued to adapt to the concept I had.


I took the idea of a spider diagram but illustrated as a light bulb beaming of the feedback just to give it character and bit more style. This is my feedback from the class about my 1234 treatment and presentation me and my group created for 1234 pitch idea.

Using this feedback we looked at whose treatment was shown the strongest, and what the class preferred more also we the group decided what concept they preferred too, so we went along with more of Yasmin's treatment idea. We did not change the idea of the treatment but we added to the concept using feed back.




Here is the feed back from the class for my groups final music video I used a normal cloud diagram.


After this feedback as a group we reflected on what we should change and adapt to, some people said the piano shot would look good if it looked like the piano was in the wood's, we done this effect following the feedback but me and my group preferred how it was before with the piano and the shots faded together.

This is how the footage looked before then following feedback for the rough cut we changed it


And we changed it to this: We took out the fading shots which were clips that were overlapped but we took out the white wall in the room and made it look the piano was outside in the wood's.


These are the few changes we made on the timeline to the final music video.


Here is my feedback from the class and teacher about the rough cut music video 1234





I used photoshop to edit my feedback and to make it attractive to the viewer of my feedback, I chose this two shapes which look like mirror frames, I thought I would have one containing positive feedback and negative. I chose the shape from photoshop shape tools and I chose a blue background to make it easy to read and stand out.

I have demonstrated my feedback with the most common words in the largest boldest font and the less common and noticed in smallest font and not bold. Also comparing the two frames you can see this way how much more positive feedback was given to me and my group about our rough cut music video than compared to negative. Which helps to show what we had focused on in our final music video.

Here are the shape tools on photoshop I chose frame 6 and edited them with these two effect Blue glass Button and Chiseled sky, I think they stand out and gives texture to my presentation of the feedback.


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