Because we changed our track to 1,2,3,4 at and todays the presentation and last lesson we still was not familiar with out music video pitch today we will have to focus on finishing our pitch.
Today will be presenting our pitches to the class and Pete (teacher) for the track we have chosen. Me and my group still need to overview what ideas we have, and if we are using al ideas from everyone collectively or just one persons.
We need to think about before the presentation.
1. Actors
2. choreography
3. location
4. Whose ideas we are following
As a class we watched every groups presentation, and took notes on the pitches then gave it to them to blog up feedback.
Me and my group finished of our presentation on key note we had about a hour to get organized for our pitches. We decided to read out slides and share the talking. I mostly spoke about my treatment for shadows presentation while Yasmin and Jahmal spoke about 1,2,3,4 mostly.
We then had feedback from the class about our group presentation.
Here is the feedback we received:
Pitch 1:
1. Building
2. Costumes
3. Studio
4. Variety - might be messy
5. Costume change
7. Big Crowd? How will it be convincing?
8. Good idea
9. Band join
10. Camera movement
11. which field?
12. Good pace
13. Nice idea to have the video like the T-mobile advert lots of people singing and playing instruments. The idea comes across very well very interesting.
14. How many people are at the end of 1,2,3,4?
15. Like the costume changing idea.
16. I love the colours from your mood-board + the idea of the changing outfits (light dark concept)
Reflecting on all of this feedback, there was no weak points about our group ideas everything seemed strong and they liked our presentation.
Shadows pitch 2
- Very detailed idea also very interesting
- Good explanation of what costumes would be used (black and white) lots of detail about the make-up.
- Shadows in the music video (good)
- Good opening
- where? (Location)
- Good Story-line but maybe just use one person
- Contrasting
- mirror problem with cameras?
- Love this video idea!
- Band?
- Created good atmosphere