Feedback about my treatment

I was given feedback from Tom in class, he told me about two things he thought was unexplained and not detailed enough.

1. Was the setting (In my treatment I said a dark room with candles but I did not mention where the room was (location)

2. Colour, I never explained what colour the music video will change into from the flickering candle light, 

In lesson we was given this treatment super Furry Animals "Golden Retriever (A video treatment by Jake and Jim) 

So I need to be more detailed.